The Note

I kind of wrote this. WELL DUH. D=
I don't know what possesses me to write material like this but that's for you to decide. Here we go...

The Note

Scribbled blurs of words.
Messy handwriting; tears in the paper.
A dog ear creased in the top right corner
Marked to the definition of apprehension.

Adverse? Content?
Protagonists of your thoughts.
Antagonists of this note.
Suspension built rapidly.

Open; low and behold.
Very unsure with tweaks of wryness
Enigmatic speech.
Fumbled pronunciation.

Redness of the face.
Clammy palms and absent beating of the heart.
Pinpoints of the body shrivel up
The note's meaning blockades the mind.

The note crawled into the skin
Poisonous words; oratory condemned.
Softly slip away of the bad news
Traverse afar to the next victim.

I think the best part of this was that it was so abstract and hardly made any sense.
Which, to me, is one of the best aspects in poetry possible.

"Redness of the face.
Clammy palms and absent beating of the heart.
Pinpoints of the body shrivel up
The note's meaning blockades the mind."

It's kind of desperate and rushed, which gives it a pretty dramatic feel.

I also like your vocabulary. You sure do know how to use it, I'm very impressed =]

Oh my. Thank you so much.
Abstract poetry is brilliant and I'm glad you caught that.
It means so much hearing that from someone with such talent and experience with poetry.
Thanks again!