In Love?

Board index - Your poetry

Author	Message
Destination_Unknown Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 105	April 12th, 2007 at 09:08am When you love someone You heart beats very fast The bonds will never come undone The fire will always last When you hold his hand Walking down the street with grace Hand in hand Listening to Three Days Grace You say "I Love You" He says "I Lve You Most" Even though he lives far from you He would be willing to drive across the coast You can never stay mad if you argue You can never stay sad if you cry If he loves you He will care for you If the bond stays strong And the fire is still lit Sing your favorite song For you are in Love
La Tua Cantante Geek Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 171	April 12th, 2007 at 10:00am its pretty!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Destination_Unknown Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 105	April 12th, 2007 at 10:48am THANK YOU SO MUCH!
C.j. Hardcore Pansy Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 97	April 12th, 2007 at 03:32pm very beautiful love.....i liked it alot.
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	April 13th, 2007 at 09:49pm it was really good! i liked it a lot but, i didn't feel it. "If he loves you He will care for you" how will he care for you? what can he do for you that is so special? that was the only part that i felt wasn't expressed enough. other than that i really liked it! don't get mad at me! it was my opinion!!
Tyler Durden Jackass Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 1454	April 14th, 2007 at 02:01pm it's awesome. i liked it. hehe
Frank's_Lover!! Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 26	May 29th, 2007 at 06:29pm Thats sweet write more plz!!!!!!!!!!!
XPitOfDespairX Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 52	June 3rd, 2007 at 07:37pm its pretty good!

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