Acoustic

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Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
May 5th, 2007 at 09:25am
Tonight, she hides behind the verses that
stream down her face, still watching her
jazz-bar serenade play with fingers that
unlocked every song beneath her skin.
She had trembled under smokey moonlight
as he coaxed melodies from her monotony
and dreamt of his cobalt eyes burning
inside her. He had played her in saxophone
soliloquys, breathed her through brass bands
before releasing her as the perfect melody.

And now she pines on Broadway's city limits,
remembering the keys and silver-lined success
that coaxed him away. She still lives in her
thoughts as his blasé ballad, scratched and
repetitious from rejection. But she keeps the
choruses he wrote on her and lip-synches with
every touch while she suffers through solos and
the scale of goodbye in her acoustic heartbreak.
PONED
Geek
PONED
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257
May 5th, 2007 at 02:44pm
that's so cool
I love it
Great job!
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Ol' Blue Eyes.
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4816

Mibba
May 7th, 2007 at 10:36pm
That was absolutely beautiful, dear. I've missed your poetry.
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
lyrical_mess
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278

Mibba Blog
May 8th, 2007 at 07:26am
Oooh! I really do love that. It paints an amazing picture. Sweet and sad...I like it.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
May 8th, 2007 at 09:56am
Ol' Blue Eyes.:
That was absolutely beautiful, dear. I've missed your poetry.

Kiss

lyrical_mess:
Oooh! I really do love that. It paints an amazing picture. Sweet and sad...I like it.

Hug

Thank you both.
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