B.J
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Posts: 8105 | May 16th, 2007 at 05:41pm I wrote two short poems today even though I rarely write poetry so here they are.
I don't care if they aren't good I just wrote them on a whim you could even turn them in to one poem from the way I separated them haha.
Strangers seated in chairs,
I decorate my own thrown without pride.
My possession of dignity lacking,
Heartstrings tuneless inside.
and now.
The silence is overpowering,
Penetrating the stale winter air.
My stallion and foil laid on the table,
The delicate fragrance, lingering.
They're probably very cryptic but the second I doubt any of you will get unless you've experienced it. |
Destination_Unknown
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Posts: 105 | May 18th, 2007 at 05:41pm hy, i like it... but it needs more some kind of details... but otherwise, its pretty awsome |
Deernt.
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  | May 18th, 2007 at 05:51pm X-Punk_Chick-X:hy, i like it... but it needs more some kind of details... but otherwise, its pretty awsome The detail was portrayed through the vocabulary that she had.
Those are great.
I love them. <3 |
B.J
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Posts: 8105 | May 19th, 2007 at 07:36am Uh.:X-Punk_Chick-X:hy, i like it... but it needs more some kind of details... but otherwise, its pretty awsome The detail was portrayed through the vocabulary that she had.
Those are great.
I love them. <3
Thank you very much.
<3
The second is a little cryptic but the subject matter isn't really necessary.
I'm not normally one to write poetry though I do enjoy it.
[: |
B.J
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Posts: 8105 | May 19th, 2007 at 07:36am X-Punk_Chick-X:hy, i like it... but it needs more some kind of details... but otherwise, its pretty awsome
Thank you, what she said. |
PONED
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Posts: 257 | May 20th, 2007 at 08:32pm X-Punk_Chick-X:hy, i like it... but it needs more some kind of details... but otherwise, its pretty awsome
No i don't think it needs anymore detail. It was fine the way it is.
Great Job!!!!! |
B.J
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Posts: 8105 | May 21st, 2007 at 04:35am Icy_Blues666:X-Punk_Chick-X:hy, i like it... but it needs more some kind of details... but otherwise, its pretty awsome
No i don't think it needs anymore detail. It was fine the way it is.
Great Job!!!!!
Thank you very much. |
