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| C.j. Hardcore Pansy Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 97  | Haha...got your attention didn't I? Wellz....now you need to read my poems and PLEASE PLEASE comment on them! I need feedback! My ecstasy was merely an excuse to your love affair Consumed in this oh-so-believable ecstasy I assume that I was wrong to even try to believe in your horrific tragedy I'm mercilessly tangled within the screams of a thousand ghost Prowling my clever dreams of immortal kisses and blood stained shores The sand was stained for only the cost; the taste of violence Was it really I who thought of this? Or was it you who drowned yourself in the midst of all this irony? Take me away and die forever in this unrealistic hierarchy Dangerous words have crossed my tonuge to only say the best of the worst Take pride in yourself, but trust not the voices that whisper in the dark For they merely want the end to the catastrophe that is your life Do you really believe that a simple sorry would fix everything that danced in the moonlight? But who needs a reason when it's three a.m. And sober kisses are excused for miserable heart aches? To the whore at your side, remember me and pray that the sun doesn't catch you Trusted not with life, but only with the purest of none so important Where can I find the sweetest of all the butterflies that lie within the veins of a porcelain doll? Surely you must know, for if you didn't wouldn't that be a lie, too? Stop talking; seconds have become harsh hours of voiceless screams And you just seem to be so....speechless Consumed in this oh-so-believable ecstasy I assume that I was wrong to even try to believe in your horrific tragedy An unforgetting Wensday thrusting it's remembrance into my already claustrophobic head aches A bloodless reality of a bitter sweet romance Of a sorrowful guilt that has weighed down my profane heart Weeping out of the darkness I've begun to lose all hope in myself Your dreamy existence of a lipstick tragedy embraces all, but conquers none Was it I who brought this on myself? This migraine of butterflies has dripped the most evil of all intoxications A morphine illusion, bringing down those orange clouds, but never lifting this emptiness Weakness was never my best interest But who am I to say that I was never weak? A regretless spirit wallows within your own pride, has it fed enough? Protector of my heart lay down your weapon and welcome this new hurt For this has only just begun the beginning of a new war A tattered remembrance of your once so beautiful face I vaguely recall a promise to your screaming heart and a compromise for mine And so I've washed away my silken smile and drowned it in a miserable complextion My kisses aren't that special if your lost within this hierarchy Disposable hearts and plastic veins; all that's left of me is wounded So kiss the fragile wings you've slain with secret whispers and perfumed secrets For all is lost when, at last, there is no hope And envy is my only savior Mid-Summer Night Affairs Summer night kisses that mean more then they should, have brought me to this broken tragedy Of hot humid nights and sweaty hands clenching together tightly An upsetting anxiety in the middle of my stomach, bringing me back into reality With innocent flirting as my alibi, the rain has wept away the chalk embraces of our romance Damaging smile, you'll shatter me before I even get the chance But only fate can tell whether these violent affairs should last, or if they should fade into my memory Reflected, the light of the moon reminds me too much of you Your nervous laughter, your tempting lips, that desperate touch, and your screaming eyes Was it all too much? Crumbling before me, this summer romance has left me in a haze of brilliant memories My smile only hides the rapid tears that fall, unknowingly, down my cheeks Liquid crystal only heals, never cures, the tell-tale markings of an alcoholic heart Mid-Summer night kisses of pure passion and intensity Of hot humid nights that soak in the reflected sunlight But were these sweaty summer affairs really worth the time and patience? Come kiss me rapidly Kisses that mean something, that's all I want from you Even if you blow them to me and the wind carries them away, never reaching my burdened lips For this one quick moment while we still have this feeling Come kiss me rapidly beneath the black velvet sky A tender anxiety that clenches me, left behind I'm sober Kisses that cause mere immortality, how young we were to believe that this was true happiness A desperate yearning for your taste Come kiss me rapidly beneath black velvet sky Before the sunset fades un my swollen heart A stinging kiss that must mean something Come kiss me, kiss me rapidly Come kiss me rapidly beneath the black velvet sky |
| C.j. Hardcore Pansy Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 97 | Come-the-fuck-on! What will get you gus attention here?!?!? All I fucking want is judgement! Is it honestly too much to ask?!!?!?! |
| worn-out astronaut. Had A Life Before GSB  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 28177  | JohnnySwitchBlade:Calm down please. If someone wants to comment your poems they will. |
| bi_bu_ra Rotting On Here  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49428 | can I give you an advice. post every poem in its own thread, and not all in the same time. people will read it and you will get more comments, k.  |
| C.j. Hardcore Pansy Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 97 | I've already done that!!!!!!! |
| Deernt. Rotting On Here  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 48258 | JohnnySwitchBlade:With your impatience and bad attitude, no one will want to comment your poetry. |
| Tahm York This Board Is My Home  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 31394 | jeez. don't be so pissy. I liked them, though. really good stuff. |
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