A Child's Play

You'll let me bleed,
Without a doubt,
It's all you need,
It'll make you shout.

Angels of evil,
Demons of day,
A never ending war,
A child's play.

Summer is gone,
The black settles in,
Night is in power,
It's time to sin.

Red versus orange,
The colours of fire,
Burns of rage,
And a fiery desire.

So give me just,
That final kiss,
The thing you know,
I'll truly miss.

wow that was good.
do u mind of i take that? i promise i won't say its mine or anything pweeze??!!!

whitluvsgreenday:

wow that was good.
do u mind of i take that? i promise i won't say its mine or anything pweeze??!!!

o_o
Why.

whitluvsgreenday:

wow that was good.
do u mind of i take that? i promise i won't say its mine or anything pweeze??!!!

If she posts it on the internet, you can do whatever you want with it.

Anyways, the rhyme was whack. I like poems that rhyme it creates a nice flow, but this rhyme was forced and repetative. the poem was also somewhat scattered and didn't really make that much sense. I think it could be imporved upon. Keep writting

I_worship_tre_Cool:

whitluvsgreenday:

wow that was good.
do u mind of i take that? i promise i won't say its mine or anything pweeze??!!!

If she posts it on the internet, you can do whatever you want with it.

Anyways, the rhyme was whack. I like poems that rhyme it creates a nice flow, but this rhyme was forced and repetative. the poem was also somewhat scattered and didn't really make that much sense. I think it could be imporved upon. Keep writting

I thought it was cool!!!
you should write more...

I_worship_tre_Cool:

whitluvsgreenday:

wow that was good.
do u mind of i take that? i promise i won't say its mine or anything pweeze??!!!

If she posts it on the internet, you can do whatever you want with it.

Anyways, the rhyme was whack. I like poems that rhyme it creates a nice flow, but this rhyme was forced and repetative. the poem was also somewhat scattered and didn't really make that much sense. I think it could be imporved upon. Keep writting

Pssh
She better credit me.





hehe.
kyeahsaidi'dgobai