Yes, I'm A Long Title Addict. I Need A Support Group

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Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
June 18th, 2006 at 05:52pm
I Was Never Good With A Bow And Arrow, So I'll Wage My War With Pen And Paper Instead.

Ink kisses on parchment paper are artificial lies
bound to the palpitating pulse of a desperate muse.
Shots of fabrications were easier to drain in tides of
angst than uncomplicated truths ever were to dreamers.
Victims of distortion are always so easy to manipulate
when their truths are lost in wisps of factory clouds;
the vapourised semen of an industrialised society.
We're all the spawn of an opinionated minority;
voices cracked and hoarse with the strain of trying
to be something other than a stuttering repetition.

Beauty was never defined in an archaic encylopedia.
And truths were never scribed upon its rotting pages.
Just out-dated facts and paranoia, moral panics and
dominant ideologies - the phobias of a weakened mind.
What was general consensus is now the literary leaves
we pad our pillows with, yarns of comedic ignorance
that has melted with new-age trends and stereotypes.
A new day will sieve fresh ideas from the gutters.
As shallow as puddles and as deep as vanity.
The bitter drug we swallow with our brand-name cereal.


Train-track expression and conventional rules of misuse.
Quoting Shakespeare on alarm-clock command and disregarding
his romantic ideologies in a flicker of gothic guise.
There's a handbook for this kind of elitist etiquette,
an instruction manual for the intellectually ignorant.
Special offer genius in artistic form. Muse not included.
It's a rip-off deal for optimists but it's a best seller.

You can spin a thesaurus into dishevelment for substitutes
if this declaration doesn't suit your mood, select from
an array of mutated words that express similar definitions,
but this orthodox message will boldy remain the same.
This isn't new-wave poetry in rebellious form.
This is anarchy in folded sheets of literacy.
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Mibba
June 18th, 2006 at 06:20pm
Inari has done it yet again, folks. Another poem to love. <3

Honey, I do believe you need a support group. But just know that us poets are always here for you to lean on. Wink
Lor
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Lor
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Posts: 476

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June 18th, 2006 at 06:28pm
Inari is very awesome...i'm now the complete Inari fangirl.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
June 19th, 2006 at 02:16am
Awww thank you guys.
Kiss
Peter Petrelli
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Peter Petrelli
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Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
June 19th, 2006 at 08:30am
Awesome Very Happy I especially loved the first verse.
Ol' Blue Eyes.
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Ol' Blue Eyes.
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Mibba
June 19th, 2006 at 09:00am
I lovelovelovelove this.

Especially the last stanza. <3333
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
June 19th, 2006 at 09:08am
Thankee guys!
snowcherry
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snowcherry
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June 19th, 2006 at 11:46am
Woohoo, that's awsome, darling. Very Happy
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
June 19th, 2006 at 12:07pm
Thank you, angel.
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
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June 19th, 2006 at 05:09pm
great!!!!!! i love it!!
The Rev
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The Rev
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Gender: Male
Posts: 14004
June 19th, 2006 at 07:38pm
if you were to look up the word Amazing in the dictionary, you would find that poem next to it Cool
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
June 20th, 2006 at 06:16am
Wow!
Thank you guys lol.
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