Dance with, Drink to, Darkness

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r e v e n g e Geek Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 234	June 23rd, 2006 at 08:16pm Dance With, Drink to, Darkness and we shall dress ourselves in blood and grit and perfume the air with the corpse flowers we will walk with those untold and we will dance with the unknown we shall toast the forbidden and gulp down the poison dew outcasts we were outcasts we are here we stand and we cant stand you we came at midnight to a place you never saw you came at midnight to a place you missunderstood come at midnight under the forgoten sun come with us stay with us drink with us run from us flee from us this party is too much for a mere mortal like you. hehe dont mess with vampires
r e v e n g e Geek Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 234	June 23rd, 2006 at 10:46pm u know it pisses me that 6 people looked at this but no one commented
Baguelle King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2727	June 23rd, 2006 at 11:31pm I really liked it. (And I was nice enough to comment ) But, anyway, I don't think there's anything else I have to say other than keep writing.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 24th, 2006 at 01:54pm I liked it, but the flow could have been better in some parts.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	June 24th, 2006 at 01:58pm You know, I really liked that poem. You got talent.
Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 4816	June 24th, 2006 at 05:16pm and we shall dress ourselves in blood and grit and perfume the air with the corpse flowers I really liked THAT bit. And the whole third stanza.
xxrage[TAYLOR]luvxx Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 17	June 25th, 2006 at 12:29pm mmmm vampires
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 25th, 2006 at 04:42pm Inari: You know, I really liked that poem. You got talent. nods I agree.
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	June 25th, 2006 at 04:44pm xxrage[TAYLOR]luvxx: mmmm vampires xD I liked it! Nice poem
Santa Billie Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8285	June 25th, 2006 at 07:41pm I especially like the first stanza, maybe that was the strongest...anyways, nice job And it doesn't have to be solely about vampires, I think you could find different meanings...like vampires are the outcasts...well so are people in real life...
r e v e n g e Geek Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 234	June 25th, 2006 at 08:03pm thanks people
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 26th, 2006 at 10:55am If I had more time right now I´d give a full review because I really like it. Favourite part; "we shall toast the forbidden and gulp down the poison dew outcasts we were outcasts we are here we stand and we cant stand you"
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	June 26th, 2006 at 10:57am Twas great. Love the whole vamp theme.
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK! Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1019	June 26th, 2006 at 05:56pm come with us stay with us drink with us run from us flee from us I really liked that part for some reason. It was good. ^_^
[Broken Pretty] Idiot Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572	June 29th, 2006 at 10:37am write more often... keep writing. i liked it.
CrazyEyes Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 112	June 29th, 2006 at 11:46am I liked it! Vampires rule.

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