The Bottom Of A Bottle

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Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	July 15th, 2006 at 12:50am God let me pickle myself alive I don't expect it to happen in a while Perhaps I'd take it as a token That I have some pity Fitting for someone such as I Drunken tales Killed with a drunken lie Said the blackout princess Found her prince Too bad it was the bottom of the barrel The bottom of the bottle God let me find something alive To be able to cling on to Let me live away this haze Let me kiss away this sick taste This awful taste And this double vision And this shallow head Said the blackout princess From the bathroom floor Afterwards it was reeling The bottom of a bottle A cynics life is the one for me One tasteless sip at a time Yet this seems less fitting Than death by drink Death by sadness Seems less likely Said the blackout princess From the bottom of the barrel Came one last shot The bottom of a bottle
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	July 15th, 2006 at 11:37am That was great! "A cynics life is the one for me One tasteless sip at a time Yet this seems less fitting Than death by drink Death by sadness Seems less likely" That part got to me the most. Really, really good.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	July 15th, 2006 at 02:22pm Wow. I loved that.
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786	July 15th, 2006 at 03:58pm Reminds me of Sylvia Plath's s=tyle for some reason Great stuff
Siva King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3708	July 15th, 2006 at 04:33pm that was really great gives cookies
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 15th, 2006 at 07:56pm That was most OSM. I love the way it was written, kind of different from your normal work.
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206	July 15th, 2006 at 09:12pm That was very good.

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