Rotten
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Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 671
 | July 19th, 2006 at 05:34pm This is a poem I wrote because I couldn't really come up with a tune for it. Hope you like it.
Clouds of words worn to the bone
Without the priviledge of feeling
I've become a slave to them
And they are my way of healing
A junkpile of discarded thoughts
Occupies my upset head
Leaving pages uncomposed
And mistakes are to be read
Without order or emotion
I've understood my problems
To come across tragedies
Doesn't mean that I have solved them
So once again I try to do
Exactly what I expect from you
Trying hard to make a song
Out of whatever goes wrong |
Inari
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Posts: 2538 | July 19th, 2006 at 05:40pm Loved that.
Especially the first two verses. |
Rotten
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| July 19th, 2006 at 05:51pm Thanks a lot! |
davey jones.
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 | July 19th, 2006 at 06:48pm That's pretty good. 
I really liked it. |
Rotten
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Posts: 671
| July 19th, 2006 at 07:27pm Thanks babe |
Ol' Blue Eyes.
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| July 20th, 2006 at 06:38pm That's good. |
Rotten
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Age: 34
Gender: Female
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| July 20th, 2006 at 08:47pm thank ya |
