robotchicken.
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 | August 27th, 2006 at 10:25pm As my love feeds from the ends of the Earth
The beauty the withered lover carries gives way to rebirth
Does the valiant heart still beat beneath my soul?
Enduring the act of suicide, the silver blade it must hold
Drinking from the cup of life as the flower blooms
Even in death our passion is written in the intertwining tombs
How does love flow through the cold steel of barbed wires?
Detesting the hybrid adrenaline fueling unfaithful liars
Sparkling blood is injected into my encarcerating confusion
Your plain face appears to me faintly like in an illusion
Fading away into the blinding light of the slow afternoon
My eyes peer to quickly, like the sunset my life moves to soon
Sitting on the window pane watching the Sun and Moon make days
Take my heart in your heart for I'll be loving you always
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again all your comments are great :] |
swoon-
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| August 27th, 2006 at 10:57pm It's really good
"Sparkling blood is injected into my encarcerating confusion"
I like that^ |
robotchicken.
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| August 27th, 2006 at 11:26pm thank you :] |
radioactive
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| August 29th, 2006 at 07:03am Vonderfall Darling.
Yes I said Vonderfall. |
robotchicken.
Falling In Love With The Board
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| August 30th, 2006 at 10:10pm Thank you all ^_^
Can you imagine I got the inspiration for this poem watching Thirteen Ghosts. O_O_O_O_O_O
and from my many crushes ._. |
11th Street Kid
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Posts: 3645 | August 31st, 2006 at 12:17pm Sheepo@_@: O_O_O_O_O_O
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Very poetic and delicate. I quite like it. |
