radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
 | August 29th, 2006 at 06:57am Boy, you know your right,
When you stand by her side,
Saving her life every night,
It must be exausting.
Girl, you know your so beautiful,
When your wrists are bleeding
He wants to drink your blood baby!
As it falls to the ground darling!
Oh girl, why do you choose suicide,
Hey, what do you want sir?!
For her to fall from a seven story building?
To cry your name as she falls to the pavement?
Well sorry,
But your disturbing dream,
Cannot be reality....unless you...
MAKE IT!
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My band is screamo kinda...thats why theres explamation(sp?) points.
So...what do you think? good? bad? awsome? terrible?
Your free to your opinion, 'cause its only the first draft =] |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | August 29th, 2006 at 07:08am That's really interesting, actually.
It's different to other things on this topic. |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 29th, 2006 at 07:09am I have an odd kind of.. creepy mind.
I think that should explain it... |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 30th, 2006 at 03:03am Nice to know one person likes it. lol |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 30th, 2006 at 03:13am I see the other one is more popular then this one. lol |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 31st, 2006 at 02:50am wow..my writing must suck..or im not popular...either way...
does anyone like this poem at all anyway?? jw |
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 7078
 | August 31st, 2006 at 11:03am Inari:That's really interesting, actually.
It's different to other things on this topic. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | August 31st, 2006 at 11:05am Inari:That's really interesting, actually.
It's different to other things on this topic.
True. And I like it. |
Siva
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3708 | August 31st, 2006 at 12:06pm i liked it |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 31st, 2006 at 08:19pm Yay! People like it =]
I'm happy. 
lol |
