Nicotine Girl (please read)

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Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 26th, 2006 at 05:57am I haven't been getting a lot of feedback on my recent poems... it makes me wonder if I should keep writing. Nicotine Girl Hello my dear How are you today? Are your teeth all gone? Have they rotted away? Your sick pleasure Will Cost your your health My Nicotine Girl You will lose all your wealth What do you get from it? A moment of peace But thanks to this drug You are never at ease My Nicotine Girl Are you you anymore? You've lost it all But... what for?
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 26th, 2006 at 10:34pm no reply?! Again?
Fashion Zombies! Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1168	October 26th, 2006 at 10:36pm Don't stop writing, it's good.
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	October 26th, 2006 at 10:36pm i liked it. What do you get from it? A moment of peace But thanks to this drug You are never at ease my faveorite part
Toxic Teeth Idiot Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645	October 26th, 2006 at 10:49pm wow i liked all of it nice work! oh and your avatar is beautiful.
Love my insanity Jackass Age: 93 Gender: Female Posts: 1591	October 26th, 2006 at 11:12pm I fucking love it. The rthyming scheme flows really good, and it has repition, but not in an annoying way. Can you post more? Or PM me with some other ones. I love the opinion of it too.
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 27th, 2006 at 01:55am Thanks My avatar has the theme, "Run very fast with Scissors" And I've been around longer than you thing on this board And I will definately post more.
Riot on the Radio Jackass Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 1841	October 27th, 2006 at 03:02am Love it.
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 27th, 2006 at 02:51pm Awsome! Thanks I'm posting another...
threeam. Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 350	October 27th, 2006 at 07:43pm Don't stop writing because nobody comments.. write because it's how you wanna express yourself. =] I love it.
beans Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 222	October 28th, 2006 at 02:42pm that poem is kik ass did u make that urself or u get it elsewhere?
LoGo Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 58	October 28th, 2006 at 02:53pm wow tis cool
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 29th, 2006 at 01:19am I wrote it. I write all my poetry, and songs and junk. If it wasn't mine it'd be plaigeurized... and thank you, I'm gad everyone likes it
Never_4get_Chickenman Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 17	October 29th, 2006 at 12:13pm i like it a lot keep on keepin' on man! lol
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	October 29th, 2006 at 05:04pm I like it!
Arcane-Inamorata King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3278	October 29th, 2006 at 05:15pm It's clever. Maybe use more imagery in your poems and they'd hit harder. You're really creative. You just made my day. P.S. Smoking is bad little kiddies. Don't do it.
GD Addicts Anonymous Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5896	October 29th, 2006 at 09:32pm I like it! It's really good.

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