The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | November 15th, 2006 at 02:07pm Don't ask, don't tell
Although I may have some perplexing ideas,
of love and war. Although sometimes I act
a little strange, you still hold my hand through
the thunderstorms at night. The lightning illuminates
your bleached blonde hair and now I think: I can.
I'm barely considerable to be a Romeo, for such a
spellbinding Juilet. I can't fight bravely, I can't offer
miraculous escatsy. And yet; yet; yet;
is that what you want?
The starlight shines brighter than the morose moon.
Shine on, shine on.
The taffata may have been be ivory,
will you stay?
Hold my hand again.
Grass stains seem beautiful in the
softness of the sunrise.
Shall we roll again
in the downy sward? |
Insurgentes
Post Whore
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 23688
| November 15th, 2006 at 02:12pm So gorgeous, I love all your work, and especially this one. ^^ |
[Your Best Mistake]
Idiot
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Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 551 | November 15th, 2006 at 02:28pm I love it. It's beautiful. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | November 15th, 2006 at 02:35pm Eeeeeeee. I love. I'm in love with 'The taffata may have been be ivory, will you stay?'
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What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| November 15th, 2006 at 04:24pm Why are your poems so awesome?! They just get better and better and I’m jealous! 
I love it. It has a great structure which I love for its originality. And for the fact that it flows so wonderfully even though the stanzas are so different. You use great imagery and your wording and timing are just brilliant.
The only thing is the ending stanza. It’s nothing wrong with it but it’s just odd. As an ending as well as a part of this particular poem. But in a way it works.
Oh, and can I keep and print this poem? I’d love to put it in the “book” with favorite poems of mine. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| November 16th, 2006 at 11:43am What's in a name?:Why are your poems so awesome?! They just get better and better and I’m jealous!
I love it. It has a great structure which I love for its originality. And for the fact that it flows so wonderfully even though the stanzas are so different. You use great imagery and your wording and timing are just brilliant.
The only thing is the ending stanza. It’s nothing wrong with it but it’s just odd. As an ending as well as a part of this particular poem. But in a way it works.
Oh, and can I keep and print this poem? I’d love to put it in the “book” with favorite poems of mine. Sure |
Deadboy
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 288
| November 16th, 2006 at 11:46am neat-o torpeado to the max  |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| November 16th, 2006 at 01:46pm Joan of Arc of Suburbia:What's in a name?:Why are your poems so awesome?! They just get better and better and I’m jealous!
I love it. It has a great structure which I love for its originality. And for the fact that it flows so wonderfully even though the stanzas are so different. You use great imagery and your wording and timing are just brilliant.
The only thing is the ending stanza. It’s nothing wrong with it but it’s just odd. As an ending as well as a part of this particular poem. But in a way it works.
Oh, and can I keep and print this poem? I’d love to put it in the “book” with favorite poems of mine. Sure
Thanks ^^ |
