Where the Circle Ends

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FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	November 30th, 2006 at 08:03pm I really like this one. Back to my shorter concept poems! Where the Circle Ends The truck ran over the curb, Slid into the stop sign And the wheel choked on asphalt. Reverse. The truck ran over the curb, Slid into the stop sign And the wheel choked on asphalt. Stuck in a moment, Lost finding where the circle ends.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	December 1st, 2006 at 06:50am It's... I'm not sure how to describe it. It's kind of 'trippy', if you know what I mean. Can't think of a better word. It's clever, that's what it is, and I love 'lost finding where the circle ends'.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	December 1st, 2006 at 10:15pm Haha trippy is a new way to describe it. I think I agree with your use of that word though. Thanks.
Maiku's Kind Ghost King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2102	December 2nd, 2006 at 11:43am I found your poem to be intresting. The simple phrasing says so much.
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 31 Gender: - Posts: 8588	December 2nd, 2006 at 02:57pm if you were a director I'd have to say you were Gus Van Sant and if your creative genious were a country then you'd be China seriously, the title, concept everything was brilliant just brilliant most of the time repitition is just one phrase, but for you, there are only two lines that aren't repition way to turn all of poetry on its ass and take the piss out of it 10000000000000000000000000000000000000/100
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	December 2nd, 2006 at 03:05pm I feel so happy now. You've made my life. Thank you so much.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	December 4th, 2006 at 03:46pm I really like how you turn everything about poetry upside down and actually manage to pull it off. I really like the last two lines, thought they were brilliant. They sorta made the whole poem To be honest I actually didn’t like this kind of poetry and in my opinion it’s nothing compared to other poems by you. But I’ll give you a lot of credit for doing it so well.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	December 4th, 2006 at 04:40pm Haha it's good that you gave me your true opinion because I know that a lot of people aren't too fond of concept poems, or whatever you would call them. So thanks.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	December 4th, 2006 at 05:03pm I believe in honesty Yeah =P But so what if I don’t like a certain type of poem, I can still see if the poet is talented/writes well (in other words, you’re welcome.)
Deernt. Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 48258	December 4th, 2006 at 07:22pm The truck ran over the curb, Slid into the stop sign And the wheel choked on asphalt. I enjoyed every bit of it. It has so much meaning which is ironic because it's placed into a couple of lines. XD I liked the stanza up above. It provided me with an intense behavior and I just loved your poem. YAY.
freedumb Idiot Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 617	December 4th, 2006 at 08:25pm I also loved the last two lines. They sumed up the whole poem. Great job!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	December 5th, 2006 at 02:40pm Thank you! So much love.

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