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rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | December 13th, 2006 at 07:05pm I told you the sunset is just hellfire above ground
I told you that your heart beat isn’t a pretty sound
Baby, you’re gonna have to play with this one to understand
I can’t tell you why I’m happy
But I’ll tell you why I’m sad
I’ll tell the things that were spoken
And all the dreams I had
I can’t say why I’m frowning
But you give me no reason to smile
I’ll let you keep at this pace
And get you comfy for a while
Did you know I feel you?
Did you know?
Did you know that I come home every day and kiss your picture?
I treat every word you write on the net like holy scripture
Standing by the fire
I claim as a liar
But I tell the truth
It’s your’s to lose
I can’t tell you how it works
I only know how to break it
But it does hurt to have you lying dead
It’s so close, just take it
Did you know I feel you?
Did you know?
Did you know that I come home every day and kiss your picture?
I treat every word you write on the net like holy scripture
Standing by the fire
I claim as a liar
But I tell the truth
It’s your’s to lose |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | December 14th, 2006 at 05:31pm please guys, this song means alot to me
what's in a name, please don't delete post, this is important to me |
ohmygodshutyourbutt
Idiot
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Gender: Female
Posts: 769
 | December 14th, 2006 at 05:55pm rage;love;clark:please guys, this song means alot to me
what's in a name, please don't delete post, this is important to me
Your avator!
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OMFG.I love that movie.
I have a shirt with the pink nightmare on it. |
Jesse Lacey
Post Whore
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23946
 | December 14th, 2006 at 06:21pm I adore it.
I think it was amazing.
I have no suggestions, but I do request you post more poems like this.
It's very deep. |
whatwasithinking
Geek
Age: 40
Gender: Female
Posts: 130
| December 14th, 2006 at 06:45pm I loved it, especially the fourth stanza
=] |
rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | December 14th, 2006 at 08:45pm O__O thank you so much! |
The Brightside.
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 235
| December 14th, 2006 at 08:53pm It's really good! |
rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | December 14th, 2006 at 09:21pm _della_rulez_:It's really good!
thank you! |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | December 15th, 2006 at 11:24am The first two lines didn't flow as well as the rest of it, purely because of the length. However... they were actually my favourite lines, but if you reworded them it'd sound awesome. 
But I REALLY like this. It's beautiful in a sort of tender, uncomplicated way. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| December 15th, 2006 at 11:45am As a songwriter, dude you pwn. PWN. Seriously. I can imagine siging along to these, they have they're own beat and shit. I love that! They've always to seem to have a Blink 182/Green Day-esque feel to them and that's great.
I'd have to agree about the first two lines though... a bit off but a touch up could easily fix that. |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | December 16th, 2006 at 08:36pm WOAH!
thank you guys!
especially joan of arc of suburbia |
