I Want To, But We Can't [temp title]

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Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
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Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
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Gender: Female
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December 26th, 2006 at 09:24pm
I wanna be your lover...
Not only just your friend...
I wanna be your lover...
'Till the day the world will end..
I wanna always be with you...
I wanna make you smile...
'Cause seeing you happy with me
Makes my life worthwhile.
I wanna be lookin' in your eyes
And see you staring back
I wanna say that I love you...
But I guess...
I'll confess...
I can't.


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Just a drabble.

I'm in over my head right now.

Tell me what you think anyways.
Deernt.
Rotting On Here
Deernt.
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December 26th, 2006 at 11:33pm
I think it's a little cliché.
It did flow a little better than I thought it would.
I also liked the lines:
I wanna always be with you...
I wanna make you smile...
'Cause seeing you happy with me
Makes my life worthwhile.


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