Tre Cool.
Addict
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 11622 | December 28th, 2006 at 10:49am It's not right
Don't worry, it's perfectly fine
He's too old
You'll be saying 'He's all mine'
It'll get you in trouble
Age doesn't matter
It's dealing with the law
Do you want your heart to shatter
Everyone will find out
You could hide it
No place for a secret
Just think right by it
Anything could happen
It would be so fun
You're not at all ready
You'd miss out on a ton
It could never happen
Sure it could work out
Too many differences
Just don't scream and shout
My mind ladies and gentlemen... |
Deernt.
Rotting On Here
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 48258
  | December 28th, 2006 at 10:53am It's not right
Don't worry, it's perfectly fine
He's too old
You'll be saying 'He's all mine'
I liked this stanza a lot.
I can relate to it as well.
Ally, I suggest you continue poetry because you're getting really good at it.
The poem was simplistic, yet portrayed a lot of meaning.
Good job.  |
