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Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 35 | January 17th, 2007 at 08:21am Death, I am not afraid
You don't scare me
Because you see, I have gone though hell
Because my parents don't except me
They say NO!, i say yes
I have a pentagram, they have a cross
Why think me evil? I am not
I'm a good witch
I shan't hurt you
I don't say things like, I curse you.
I say, Blessed Be and Merry Meet
That's our greeting.
I'm not a evil creature demented to hell
But i wish i could be I only ever wanted
Was to hear they understand.
Maybe A poem can reach out
To those who think us wicked
I do not understand. It seems hell is
at my door
Do I anwser? |
Ghostie.
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Gender: Female
Posts: 495
 | January 17th, 2007 at 08:03pm I know exactly what you're going through; I'm Wiccan too. ^__^
As for the poem, it's great. It's straight forward and deep. Awesome.
Also, feel free to pm me sometime! |
Jagged Little Pill
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 | January 18th, 2007 at 04:47pm Wow... I would say I know what you're going through but I don't. I couldn't imagine my mother not accepting my religon and having to go through what you discribed there. |
wait_what
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| January 18th, 2007 at 09:17pm I'm not exactly crazy about it. I know that poetry is supposed to be emotional, but this just sounds more like a rant and stuff. There's not really anything poetic about it at all...
I'm not trying to be mean or anything. This is just some constructive criticism.
Also make sure to read through your poetry before you post it. You have some spelling errors. |
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| January 21st, 2007 at 08:37am Same here. I'm Wiccan. |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
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Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
| January 22nd, 2007 at 11:42am wait_what:I'm not exactly crazy about it. I know that poetry is supposed to be emotional, but this just sounds more like a rant and stuff. There's not really anything poetic about it at all...
I'm not trying to be mean or anything. This is just some constructive criticism.
Also make sure to read through your poetry before you post it. You have some spelling errors.
Same. I can't really find any sort of rythym to it. It would make better prose. But I liked one idea. "I have a pentagram, they have a cross." |
