The Way I Feel For You

No matter what people do
No matter what people say
There's not a single soul
That's ever felt the way

I feel for you; in times of grief
In times of heartbreak and in pain
When you felt yourself fall to your kness
And went totally insane.

Please know I'm always here for you,
No matter what you do,
There's not a single soul
Upon the earth
Who loves like I love you.

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Just random. Wasn't meant to be anything to be critiqued on. But go ahead. I just felt like posting it. I don't like the ending part of the second stanza...

I like this.
It's a very down to earth, caring poem and it speaks for a lot of people.
It speaks for me. The rhyming was ok and the format was good too.
Good job.

The rhyme and wording are very cliche. It also felt very forced.

The line break at the end of the first stanza to the second stanza is also very awkward. While that does work in most cases in poems, it doesn't work here because that's not present anywhere else in the poem- which is one example of why your rhyming sounds forced.

Keep writing, though.