The Taste of Roses

This is short. I revised this from a paragraph I wrote...and it still sucks. But perhaps I can adapt my new ideas into a story other than a rare poem...

The Taste of Roses
Oh how the roses used to taste so sweet;
The edges of their petals an emberous gold
Where lips and tongue meet,
Ubiquitous, those petals that fold,
Like my lover's scent.

I like it a lot.
Very descriptive and it's worded almost perfectly.

Short and sweet and very good. The last line is absolutely wonderful.

Thanks guys.

I really liked this poem because it was short. It didn't daddle on and on.

For some reason this poem reminds me of feeling lonely.

I'm Lizalicious is right, it is perfect

That was pretty beautiful. Nice use of words and such. And interesting rhyme scene.

^_^