You Still Skip Love Songs

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newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	March 17th, 2007 at 10:42am Dedication: Faith, and all the heartbroken girls out there. You Still Skip Love Songs (just press "mute" next time) Well I've been around the world, Been kissed all night by acid trips, And cross my heart - not one of them Tastes quite like your luscious lips. Eccentric cuts and stabs; they heal with every breath. You were my only heroin, my precious crystal meth. If I was to crawl on glass Would you let me hold your hand? I can be your fragile feather Dropped in sinking sand.
Faith Addict Age: 39 Gender: Female Posts: 11507	March 17th, 2007 at 10:49am You're so talented. Thank you so much, I love you.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	March 17th, 2007 at 11:16am My God, you pulled that rhyme scheme off so perfectly. I love all the imagery in that; it's stunning!
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	March 17th, 2007 at 11:22am FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda: My God, you pulled that rhyme scheme off so perfectly. I love all the imagery in that; it's stunning! I started rhyming again.
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	March 17th, 2007 at 02:33pm great job
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	March 18th, 2007 at 07:02am Gbfdghilighna. One of my favourite pieces ever by you. So, you're accomplished at both free verse, abstract stucture, and rhyming? Psssshhh. Well I never. I especially fell in love with- actually, I was going to say what my favourite image was, but after re-reading twice I can't seperate what I love most.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	March 19th, 2007 at 12:52pm Wow. Your talent is just so enviable. I love how you can express such emotions in so few lines.
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 31 Gender: - Posts: 8588	March 19th, 2007 at 07:59pm it's so beautiful I could just forget to read into it you just write in a style that is so incredibly beautiful, yet amazingly deep when you really look into it that last stanza was orgasmic, the whole poem built up to amazing metaphors, rhyme (especially purposeful), and alliteration just beauftiul
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018	March 26th, 2007 at 12:18am Your rhyming is perfectly executed. I...love it.
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844	March 26th, 2007 at 05:50pm is so shocked and amazed, she has no words to say loves it immensley Your rhyming is amazing... Well there... I had something to say. xD
worn-out astronaut. Had A Life Before GSB Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28177	March 27th, 2007 at 05:08am Its so beautiful.
Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 4816	March 29th, 2007 at 10:53pm Good lord that was so beautiful.

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