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Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | April 14th, 2007 at 04:56pm Open your eyes
There is someone out there who's right
Don't say your goodbye's
You have to keep looking otherwise
Because you are not alone
When you find your right
Open your eyes and see the sun with the world around you
Don't mind the fight
Look at the life of your love
You are not alone
When he lookes at you,
You know he's there for you for life
Open your eyes because you are not alone
Still follow the dreams of your life
Don't end it now
It has just begun
The journy is long and wide
Look over the sun
You will see the angles singing
They call you to keep going
Open your eyes to the world
Your life is calling you
Be free and don't let go
You have someone with you
You are not alone
He understands and he felt just like you
You are not lone
Don't let go, just keep going because life is still calling. |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | April 14th, 2007 at 05:02pm it was really really good, but i felt a lot of mixed feelings in there. I don't know if you're happy, sad, i can't really tell. But that's just me, i have a sensitive feeling for poetry. feel free to disagree
good job though |
Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | April 14th, 2007 at 05:14pm lol thanx... i had alot of mixed feelings when i wrote it .... its supposed to make you think.... |
brompton cocktail.
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 983
 | April 14th, 2007 at 05:50pm I like it waaayyyyy too much! It made me think... a lot! Woo! I actually thought!! lol |
Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | April 14th, 2007 at 05:54pm lol thank you!!! |
Tyler Durden
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 1454
 | April 14th, 2007 at 09:06pm i like it.
it had a visualistic-ness, that's really good. i like it.
it sends mixed messages, but it does make you think.
good job. *thumbs up* |
La Tua Cantante
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
| April 14th, 2007 at 10:57pm its nice |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | April 15th, 2007 at 01:55pm X-Punk_Chick-X:lol thanx... i had alot of mixed feelings when i wrote it .... its supposed to make you think....
okay good. i also thought i was going crazy lol |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 87
Gender: Female
Posts: 5844
| April 15th, 2007 at 02:20pm I agree with frankissexybitch234. It's nice..
When he lookes at you.
You will see the angles singing.
Few errors. "Looks," not "lookes", and "angels" not "angles."
But other than that, I did like it. |
Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | April 15th, 2007 at 05:59pm oh wow yeah thanx!!! |
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369 | April 15th, 2007 at 06:06pm "Don't let go, just keep going because life is still calling."
I like that line.
It is unsingable to me but it seems like it should be a song. |
jedi ninja
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 910 | April 17th, 2007 at 11:55am i really like it. it also made me thinkkk
i like the feel and meaning of it =] |
La Tua Cantante
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
| May 29th, 2007 at 05:59pm Candlelight Chaos:its nice
.....sorry i was doing a project and i was just really busy ever since....its really good!
definately thinking like  |
XPitOfDespairX
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 52
| June 3rd, 2007 at 07:38pm ^^^ lol
it does make you think!
too bad i hate thinking thoughh lol
but besides that i liked the poem a lot |
