La Tua Cantante
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Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
  | May 29th, 2007 at 04:50pm waiting for that name,
remembering you thought it wouldnt happen to you
then the nurse came
you thought for a second what do you do?
Surgery's at 12:30 sharp
you hope they'll be late, they always are
well just your luck, 12:30 sharp
They wheel you in the OR room
you knocked out, like i a fist fight
Here comes your doom
Life passes before your sight
10 minutes go by
the max amount of blood is lost
nearby your husband sighs
the consistent beep turns to one long line, as dead as a post
the doctors try and try to bring you back
but its no use now
As the doctor comes out
all hear the loud crying of
the man who lost his dear wife
As he drags himself home
he sees his daughter and son
As he breaks the news, well some
they burst into tears
"Daddy, why did Mommy have to leave" said the daughter
"She's in a better place now honney"
As all cry
In one stray conner sit
the son as he sees all go by
"He's fallen into a dark pit"
Little did they know
he sank to a new low
As her coffin is lowered
the son isn't to be found
Until found in the bathroom
Dead on the floor like a dog in a pound |
XPitOfDespairX
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 52
| June 3rd, 2007 at 06:43pm awww
thats a twist in the poem
allthough, whos said that hes fallen into a dark pit? |
PaNcAkEs
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| June 4th, 2007 at 05:24am this is so deep, i really like it |
La Tua Cantante
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
| June 4th, 2007 at 03:57pm XPitOfDispairX:
thank you
i dont know....i guess i jsut made it random lol
Perfect Pervert:
thanks
i thought that making the son die as well was a good idea.... :-/  |
