Destination_Unknown Geek
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 105 | May 31st, 2007 at 07:44pm The sound of your voice
The stories you tell
The way you make me smile
The feel of your touch
The rebel you are
The way you make me laugh
The warmth of your breath
The fantasy you want
The way you make me happy
The beat of your heart
The dream you have
The way you are
The one who stole my heart |
PaNcAkEs Jackass
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 1808
 | June 1st, 2007 at 02:54am awesome...simply awesome.
*hands cookie*
its so simple, yet pretty. *claps* |
XPitOfDespairX Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 52
 | June 3rd, 2007 at 07:41pm awww
thats sweet
you definately have been getting better throughout your poems!
great job! |
PONED Geek
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257 | June 8th, 2007 at 08:42pm I t is good. and very sweet. You are getting to be so much better than you used to be  |