Writing Lyrics

WOW.......


why arnt you faymous(sp?)

Sammie:

WOW.......


why arnt you faymous(sp?)

me?

because i suck and most of these songs dont even have music to them yet... haha.

here's another song:

brainwashed america
think they're the land of the free,
but an army full of cuntwads
regulate what they concieve.
controlled and sacrificed,
until the government is pleased.
with the bloodshed and destruction
of the "equal" human beings.

i don't see a future
with these governmental pricks.
no future,
with these brainwashed hypocrites.
there is no fucking future,
cuz everyones the same
and they think they're liberated,
but there's freedom left to gain.

the brainwashed society
thinks theyre free and revolutionized.
but laws and regulations
lead them through a preplanned life.
zombies and conformists,
living each and every day.
take away our future,
cuz they think they know the way.

i don't see a future
with these governmental pricks.
no future,
with these brainwashed hypocrites.
there is no fucking future,
cuz everyones the same
and they think they're liberated,
but there's freedom left to gain.

the fascist government
doesnt want us to exist.
they want us to conform,
and join the hypocrites.
we're left without a future
free of authority and lies.
but there's a sale on regulation,
that society rushes out to buy.

If only you lived in Glasgow I would be dragung your ass in to my band!

Sammie:

If only you lived in Glasgow I would be dragung your ass in to my band!

hehe, well thanks

me and nathan are the only members in our "band". no one here likes us or punk music.

xAnarchy4theUSAx:

Sammie:

If only you lived in Glasgow I would be dragung your ass in to my band!

hehe, well thanks

me and nathan are the only members in our "band". no one here likes us or punk music.

Lol me and my mate amanda are the only ones in our band as well...we cant only have two guitarests in the band.

No one here likes us because were girls they dont think we can play.

Why don't people just post them in the poetry thread? I do.

xAnarchy4theUSAx. You are really good.

LiberationOfTheLostSoul:

Why don't people just post them in the poetry thread? I do.

Because people see them as poems. and trying the read lyrics with a Poem flow is just. BLah.

[Blind Camera.]:

xAnarchy4theUSAx. You are really good.

thanks

and i posted them in there a long time ago. so... i dont know. haha.

Apeirophobic Nightmare

fuck eternal life.
god who art in hell.
followers of his practice,
future prisoners in his cell.

It's a hidden trap,
buried beneath the grave.
The ones who think they know the truth,
are the ones that can't be saved.

fuck eternal life,
god who art in vain.
the ones glued their church pews,
are cursed with immortal pain.

Its a foretold plaque,
written in his creed.
The ones who read between the lines,
are the ones you can't intrigue.

Actually. I love that shit xD

I write lyrics about everything, one time I wrote a song about a papercut it wasn't badd

xAnarchy4theUSAx you can be okay to talk to, but man, all your lyrics sound like a Rage Against the Machine knock-off (sorry, I don't mean to offend you, I can't write worth shit either)

spill_no_sick:

xAnarchy4theUSAx you can be okay to talk to, but man, all your lyrics sound like a Rage Against the Machine knock-off (sorry, I don't mean to offend you, I can't write worth shit either)

that's odd. considering i've only ever heard one rage against the machine song in my entire life and dont even remember it... but whatever.

The first full length song i wrote. Came straight from the heart and it's still my fave to perform

**Loves Forbidden**

Vs 1//
You were once together,
And happiness was yours.
But now your not allowed to love,
On those feelings, close the doors.

Bridge//
It hurts you to look at him,
And you see him every day.
You've got to hold you head up high,
And pretend everythings okay.

Chorus x2
Paste the smile on your face,
Keep your feelings hidden.
Every time you look at him,
You know love is forbidden.

Vs 2//
Everyone thinks your over him,
And your happy being friends.
But deep inside you know the truth,
You'll love him till the end

Bridge
Chorus x2

I paste the smile on my face
I keep my feelings hidden.
And every time i look at him,
I know that loves forbidden

blah it sucked so now its gone

MinOrity PunK92:

ok here it goes, if this was it song it would be really fast paced and hard rocking but not metal:

life sucks!
i have about five bucks
i think im going insane
and i think im gonna kill myself

chorus
dont be surprised when im dead
im just messed up in the head
now i wanna go to bed
but im just not tired
when i have a job i'll get fired
now all i can do is cry
until the fabulouse day i die

death will be great
with a hint of hate

Chorus

im just insane now
i dont know how
but nothing works out
i just wanna black out
hormones are going crazy
and im so friggen lazy
someone save me
from life!

chorus

i think i'll continue to complain
and wait for the rain
to make me madder
and sadder
but then i'll see her and get gladder
but shes gonna dump me
because of me
i'll screw up
she'll grow up
and i'll stay a kid
NOW SCREAM!
[/i]yell, slowly getting quiet

chorus[X2]
dont be surprised when im dead!





yea it sucks and its not an emo song i was just really mad

that was lame and sounded fake as fuck.

You live by shattered faith
broken bones and there's no hope
They say there will be light
but its dark 6 feet underneath the ground
your messiah never shows
so where's your saviour now?
where's your saviour now?

you touch the holy rose
rip the flesh on the black thorns
your star is stained from the blood
smile in agony
all just for him
but where's your saviour now?
where's your fucking saviour now?

ooh..ooh
[scream] ooh

they say he's a giver but he's a taker
a cold stone heart breaker
you'd die just for him
but he's only a figment
mesiah will never show
so where's your saviour now?
where's your saviour now?

you touch the holy rose
rip the flesh on the black thorns
your star is stained from the blood
smile in agony
all just for him
but where's your saviour now?
where's your saviour now...?

i havn't got a title for it yet and it's not finished cause i always make changes

i write songs too...but msot of them i keep to myself, i don\t know anybody i can trust enough to show em to, exept my friend Age...in etsonian we cal em@sahtli kirjutajad@ as in, drawer writers...lol...hahaha...ba dhabbit, i mjust show em to my teatcher..lol...guitar teatcher...lol. i have to force myself. i have stage fright lol...and teh need for attention...

Oh.....Jeez....Okay, I'm like...wow. All your songs look really kewl. Natural beat, Ya know? Well, could you guys please give me feedback on my song? Thanks. ^_^

Stoned against the conformation
jaded nation,regulation-
of the burning city lights,
minipulation,dedication
hail to the ones who try to do what's right
but just fall into the wrong again
the angel of the city
rears it's ugly head
of destruction, the reduction
of our minds-
he's the king of hope left behind

The nation fears what he will do
as they penetrate our minds with
noblation, formation
of the common man on scyinide
to the life and liberty
the pursuit of pessimecy
the one who's got the flamethrower
on our minds-
the king of hope left behind


It's kinda short, I know.....but If ya could, please tell me what ya think? (Be honest, now. )

I don't write the lyrics, I write the SONG. My friend writes the lyrics. If I can figure out a way to publish sound files on the internet, I post the song we just wrote. WARNING: It's not very punk, its like, well, Blues-metal.