The Fire Series

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Banach95
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July 7th, 2006 at 05:57am
ThisIsGreenDay
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Mibba
July 9th, 2006 at 12:39am
billiejocrazeds:
I Love Tre... hes soooooooo HOT I think its hot when guys makeout with each other!
You should be banned for spam.

Or shot.

Whichever.


MICHELLE!!! UPDATE EVEN MORE!!!
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Mibba
July 9th, 2006 at 04:02am
YEEEEEEEEEESSS! CHAPTER 14 HAS ARRIVED
Banach95
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July 9th, 2006 at 04:42pm
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Mibba
July 10th, 2006 at 04:50pm
I'm currently sitting on Chapter 2 of The Fire and I am all ready impressed. She's not a Lola-named piece of jailbait who wants to jump Billie Joe's bones!

You have a good sense of detailing, history and storytelling. I'm really enjoying it so far.
Banach95
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July 10th, 2006 at 05:56pm
Pickle:
I'm currently sitting on Chapter 2 of The Fire and I am all ready impressed. She's not a Lola-named piece of jailbait who wants to jump Billie Joe's bones!

You have a good sense of detailing, history and storytelling. I'm really enjoying it so far.



Embarassed *blushes* Embarassed

Thanks for the honest feedback Smile

Though I did feel like I rushed it a bit especially in those first chapters... As I said that OC was created in 1986 so I have a HUGE amount of background for her that I have been leaking in here and there in the story...
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Mibba
July 10th, 2006 at 08:35pm
Yeah, it was a little rushed, but not so much that I couldn't understand what was going on.
Banach95
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July 10th, 2006 at 08:57pm
You also can tell the grammer was off.. You can tell when I became an editor as the grammer became much better. Not that it was horrible before hand or anything Wink


OHHH an the part 1 was actually a stand alone piece I wrote using what is called 'Guided Imagery'

A leader reads a small paragraph or couple of sentences and you must continue that paragraph being as descriptive as possible.

I submitted that to GSB and decided to use it as a 'Prologue' and insert my OC and GD. It worked well...
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July 11th, 2006 at 04:40am
I've just read part 15 and loved it as ever. Can't wait for the next part and hope its coming soon. What's Beth's story and when is Jill going to be in it... so much happening...

My mum is also reading the story as you know and she says its so good and don't be long getting the next part out.
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Mibba
July 11th, 2006 at 04:41am
Whose that in your AVA. he looks a little Mike Dirntish!!
Banach95
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July 11th, 2006 at 05:01am
~Sexxi~Tre~:
Whose that in your AVA. he looks a little Mike Dirntish!!


THAT is my husband age 18 in 1973...
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and Mr. Dirnt more than likely close to the same age...
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BOTH bass players...

brothers seperated at birth??
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Mibba
July 11th, 2006 at 05:59am
Oh my god they are so alike?!?!?

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Banach95
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July 11th, 2006 at 09:48am
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Mibba
July 11th, 2006 at 10:09am
Been there and done that... Fantastic work ..... awaits now for 17
ThisIsGreenDay
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Mibba
July 13th, 2006 at 09:41pm
I'll write mine, if you write yours. Grli
Banach95
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July 13th, 2006 at 09:42pm
ThisIsGreenDay:
I'll write mine, if you write yours. Grli


silleh Mike whore... I already gots chapter 17 DONE.... Razz

Just haven't submitted it yet Wink



You want me to get to Feed the Flames...
ThisIsGreenDay
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July 13th, 2006 at 09:47pm
sampalletband:
ThisIsGreenDay:
I'll write mine, if you write yours. Grli


silleh Mike whore...

Damn straight, silleh trehooligan.

sampalletband:
I already gots chapter 17 DONE.... Razz

Just haven't submitted it yet Wink

Well, then...part 18...get on it, whore! Bbat

sampalletband:
You want me to get to Feed the Flames...

Shifty Maybeh. Shifty
Banach95
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July 13th, 2006 at 09:49pm
ThisIsGreenDay:
sampalletband:
ThisIsGreenDay:
I'll write mine, if you write yours. Grli


silleh Mike whore...

Damn straight, silleh trehooligan.

sampalletband:
I already gots chapter 17 DONE.... Razz

Just haven't submitted it yet Wink

Well, then...part 18...get on it, whore! Bbat

sampalletband:
You want me to get to Feed the Flames...

Shifty Maybeh. Shifty



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Banach95
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July 15th, 2006 at 09:35pm
*walks into thread to lovingly place Chapter 17 in the room*
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July 15th, 2006 at 09:54pm
Just read it...awesome! Up
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