It's not worth the cut (unless you see blood)
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Kurtni Admin Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 | I'll never ever tell a poet they can't write about any subject matter and it's stupid. I will tell you that there is more to poetry then dark emotions. Especially when nothing makes this one stand out, it's just kind of bland. If you choose to write "emo" poems, do it with vivid details and descriotive words, so it's different. Don't make it sound like everything else. |
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588 | I_worship_tre_Cool:I'm just concentrated on her reputation on here. She did this for venting but posted it as a poem that has been done a million times before...I don't want her turned away from GSB because she posted venting in a forum. |
Brendon Urie.. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2394 | Me getting criticized for what you call "emo" poems ... [-shudders- I hate that word.] ... isn't anything new for me, I assure you. I didn't post this as venting. This poem is from October of 2005. It's just a poem I'm proud of and wanted to post. I assure you I won't turn away from GSB simply because of this. I've dealt with worse on lots of other forums. |
Megan. Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: - Posts: 6962 | Yea. I agree with Ella and spill_no_sick. Took the words right out of my mouth |
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588 | druscilla_armstrong: wow, you're a lot stronger than most people on here I'm glad you took what I said as possible as advice as opposed to something I'm telling you to do you are allowed to make you're own decisions, no strings attached, I just hope you take what I said into consideration other than that, I admire your strength (I'm not saying "emo" in a negative way, you just write with emo style, sorry if you don't want to |
Kurtni Admin Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 | druscilla_armstrong:alot of people would have, it's a good trait ot have as a poet to be able to take critiscm and not ignore it and not get offended by it, you should be proud of that. |
Brendon Urie.. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2394 | spill_no_sick: I've learned to attack only on people who make no sense. Like 'omg that suckz so bad quit riting and dye'. Complete with typos. |
Too Much Eyeliner Jackass Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297 | Thats awesome. |
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 49206 | international_idiot: I must agree. Suicide seems to be such a popular topic to write about. But every suicide poem is just unoriginal and, well, unpalatable. Try finding inspiration. I don't think suicide/cutting isn't very inspirational. |
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