anti-bush, anti-war (this is not a poetry but a song)

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Slappy Geek Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 158	May 30th, 2006 at 01:38pm I_worship_tre_Cool: Slappy: Well didnt you say "I wish i didnt have thumbs because it really fucking sucked."? Exactly. No, now she edited it to say "It was really good. I give it two thumbs up..." Doesnt mean she didnt say it. She's just a closet hypocrit, i guess.
Kurtni Admin Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	May 30th, 2006 at 01:42pm punk_thrash_chick: i dont care i only post this to ask for a lil advice on how to write music cuz im a newbie at writin song and im actually happy that ppl r tellin me this stuff so i can know what to change to make my song better Well, with that said, we didn't give very much constructive help did we? Before you post things, read them out loud, what looks good on paper and what sounds good tend to differ. Also, free verse is excellent, but a poetic vibe doesnt hurt, a "flow" if you will. Keep writting.
Ghostie. Geek Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 495	May 30th, 2006 at 01:47pm Very nice! I love it...it's everything I couldnt find words to explain. -10-
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 30th, 2006 at 03:14pm Yes, you need to work on the flow. If you're going to write something political, do some research first, please. Usually metaphors work rather well in getting a point across, just as long as they're not too confusing. Try using some of those.
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	May 30th, 2006 at 03:19pm [Flawless Error]: Yes, you need to work on the flow. If you're going to write something political, do some research first, please. Usually metaphors work rather well in getting a point across, just as long as they're not too confusing. Try using some of those. Yes! Zomigah, I love metaphors. And... ignore the harsh comments with no tips or critisms. Keep working at it, in time you will get better. You should see my first poem.
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588	May 30th, 2006 at 04:57pm Bloodraine: Does Bush actually use Cocaine or were you making that up? Because I think that is slander... slander isn't protected by the First Amendment but Bush did use cocain in the seventies
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588	May 30th, 2006 at 05:02pm never EVER right anything anti-war because no one can pull it off there are a select few like Primus's Too Many Puppies and some songs by The Clash but Green Day couldn't pull it off and not many people here are as good as Green Day just stay away from cliche topics or be prepared for the honest people here to slam you
Kurtni Admin Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	May 30th, 2006 at 05:02pm spill_no_sick: Bloodraine: Does Bush actually use Cocaine or were you making that up? Because I think that is slander... slander isn't protected by the First Amendment but Bush did use cocain in the seventies And according to some tabloids he now has a drinking problem and is getting marriage counsling.
Miley Cyrus Basket Case Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 15185	May 30th, 2006 at 05:12pm [slightly off topic] I don't like the guy much either, but it's not just him that's fucking up here; It's the whole goverment. [/slightly off topic]
ladyramone Post Whore Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 21701	May 30th, 2006 at 05:13pm sheepless and redundant: [slightly off topic] I don't like the guy much either, but it's not just him that's fucking up here; It's the whole goverment. [/slightly off topic] no its true. goverments around the world are corrupt, not only in America kids.
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588	May 30th, 2006 at 05:28pm I_worship_tre_Cool: spill_no_sick: Bloodraine: Does Bush actually use Cocaine or were you making that up? Because I think that is slander... slander isn't protected by the First Amendment but Bush did use cocain in the seventies And according to some tabloids he now has a drinking problem and is getting marriage counsling. he HAD a drinking problem, but he's under 24/7 survailence so we would figure out ANY time he has a drink he claims to not drink since office, and he's seen even when he sleeps so there's no possible way he has enough drinks to have a problem as for the marriage counsiling.....you're reading a tabloid
Kurtni Admin Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	May 30th, 2006 at 05:35pm spill_no_sick: I_worship_tre_Cool: spill_no_sick: Bloodraine: Does Bush actually use Cocaine or were you making that up? Because I think that is slander... slander isn't protected by the First Amendment but Bush did use cocain in the seventies And according to some tabloids he now has a drinking problem and is getting marriage counsling. he HAD a drinking problem, but he's under 24/7 survailence so we would figure out ANY time he has a drink he claims to not drink since office, and he's seen even when he sleeps so there's no possible way he has enough drinks to have a problem as for the marriage counsiling.....you're reading a tabloid Yeah, it was just a tabloid, I never said it was the absolute truth.
punk_thrash_chick Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 14	May 30th, 2006 at 05:37pm god ppl cant believe yall arugin bout this most the shit i write were information from magazine and the news alright
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588	May 30th, 2006 at 05:43pm yeah....if you have to do research it MIGHT not be a worth while topic for poetry I just want you to know early on that the topic of the poem is INCREDIBLY important I don't want you to become a crappy poet frequent poster so all rush of critisism is because I want you to become a better poet

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