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Pickle
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 | August 11th, 2006 at 02:29pm |
Pickle
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| August 13th, 2006 at 05:58pm *Sigh* I'm working on Chapter 19 now, just so you know and I got some love blooming and dying in these future chapters. Nobody is safe from time. |
Pickle
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| August 17th, 2006 at 01:00pm I just submitted Chapter four and I'm so sorry I've been leaving you guys hanging. I've been very lazy lately. Updates from now on are probably going to get steadily slower because my classes start Monday, I'm moving Saturday, start my new job next week, etc. Bear with me please. |
Pickle
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| August 20th, 2006 at 12:49am |
Diskoh
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
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| August 20th, 2006 at 11:00am I love this story..and wow..Joey looks SO much like his father in your 'players' XD |
Pickle
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| August 20th, 2006 at 11:48am Thanks! I think he'll look a lot like his dad so I picked an old BJ pic for that.  |
Pickle
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| August 23rd, 2006 at 04:07pm I decided to switch colors.
I just submitted Chapter 5 and this is the chapter that is the beginning of the turning point in the story. Look for it and check out London Blast! |
Pickle
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| August 27th, 2006 at 12:33pm Chapter 5 is up. See what happens to Jakob. Dun, dun, dun!  |
*Tan-is-ha_Shifty*
Jackass
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1040
| August 27th, 2006 at 08:48pm I just read the story don't let morning come that you said was your inspiration for this story. Your story isn't going to be as sad as that story is it because I don't think I can handle that sadness again. The only other story that made me cry as much as that was the book A Child Called It by Dave Pelzer. |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870
 | August 27th, 2006 at 08:50pm *Tan-is-ha_Shifty*:I just read the story don't let morning come that you said was your inspiration for this story. Your story isn't going to be as sad as that story is it because I don't think I can handle that sadness again. The only other story that made me cry as much as that was the book A Child Called It by Dave Pelzer.
EXCELLENT SERIES OF STORIES |
davey jones.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
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Posts: 7018
| August 27th, 2006 at 08:51pm I read A Child Called It.
Excellent, indeed. |
*Tan-is-ha_Shifty*
Jackass
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1040
| August 27th, 2006 at 08:58pm I've read A Child Called It and The Lost Boy but I haven't read the other one yet. |
Pickle
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| August 27th, 2006 at 09:25pm *Tan-is-ha_Shifty*:I just read the story don't let morning come that you said was your inspiration for this story. Your story isn't going to be as sad as that story is it because I don't think I can handle that sadness again. The only other story that made me cry as much as that was the book A Child Called It by Dave Pelzer.
Uh, I'm not sure yet. I haven't decided what route I want to take with the ending. |
Pickle
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| August 30th, 2006 at 07:41pm Handguns For Hearts©:I read A Child Called It.
Excellent, indeed.
BTW, is that a story on here? I meant to ask that earlier.
Okay, here's the poo, I just uploaded chapter 6 and these next few chapters have a lot in them and since I have no patience, here's a teaser of chapter 6. Enjoy!!
Adrienne sniffed and wiped her eyes. “Okay. We have to be strong for Jakob. When we see him, don’t stare too hard, don’t say anything stupid, don’t. . .” Adrienne was beginning to loose her composure. “Why would someone do this? Who would do this?”
Billie Joe embraced his wife again. “The police are looking into it baby. We’ll get the person who did this.”
“I want them to suffer. I want them to die. I want them to feel the pain Jakob’s feeling now.” Adrienne cried into Billie Joe’s shoulder.
Joey said nothing but sat there. He was anxiously waiting for the police to come back and tell them exactly what he thought, Frankito Wright had attempted, but didn’t succeed, in killing Jakob Danger Armstrong. |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
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| August 30th, 2006 at 07:47pm Pickle:Handguns For Hearts©:I read A Child Called It.
Excellent, indeed.
BTW, is that a story on here? I meant to ask that earlier.
hey Pickle,
No it's not story on here. Its a series of books about the life of the author which may or maynot have happen. It's a look into the world of mental illness. It's graphic and disturbing and makes you think... |
Pickle
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| August 30th, 2006 at 11:42pm Oh, okay. I didn't know. Thanks for clearning that up for me. |
*Tan-is-ha_Shifty*
Jackass
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1040
| September 2nd, 2006 at 07:41pm You should read it it's really good. I got it from the library first but then I bought it. |
Pickle
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| September 19th, 2006 at 08:17pm I just submitted a new chapter. I'm sorry for the delay! |
davey jones.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 7018
| September 19th, 2006 at 08:23pm A Child Called It.
I stole the book from my sister, who said she didn't want me reading it because it was morbid and that "no ten your old's mind should be reading about things like this."
Pfft. It didn't bother me a bit. 
Here's a little info about it. |
Pickle
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| September 19th, 2006 at 08:25pm I'll have to check that out. Thanks. |
