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HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 13th, 2006 at 01:07pm Alright, I've been thinking of this plot for a long while and just recently started putting my thoughts into words. I've started writing a new story, entitled Beverley's Bolero.
Here's what I have for a summarization:
Beverley Feldman -nicknamed Bevvy -is a thirty-year-old herbalist doctor from Luverne, Alabama who moves to San Francisco after university and falls in love with a fifty-year-old neurosurgeon named Edward Sampson. When they wed, Beverley becomes eager to have children, but her elder husband hasn't the time to be bothered with such things. She begins to feel discontent with her marriage, and when Edward's work transfers him to Tokyo, she thinks it may be the start of something new for their relationship. She reopens her practice in Japan, developes an illness and endures an operation. On their third wedding anniversary, Edward takes Bevvy out to dinner but slighly ignores her. When they begin to quarrel over the status of their relationship -right in the midst of a Westin Tokyo Hotel restaurant -a catostrophic incident occurs. An earthquake hits Japan and Beverley finds herself lost in the dark of one of the hotel's many hallways.
That's as far as I'll go without giving the whole story away, but I'll assure you there will be lots of romance and tragedy (like you're used to).
Alright, OC introduction.
This is Beverley Sampson (Feldman):

Played by the lovely Alicia Silverstone. If you're a older crowd, think Aerosmith videos. If you're a younger crowd, think Clueless. And in case you can't tell from the above pictures, her hair is blonde as usual. |
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018
 | August 13th, 2006 at 02:12pm Sound wicked!
I like the plot. If it's respectfully written, which I believe that it will be, it could really be an awesome story.
This could easily become a popular story, GD related or not.
This sounds like something my parents would read.  I mean that in a good way! |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 13th, 2006 at 02:17pm A Melancholy Autumn:Sound wicked!
I like the plot. If it's respectfully written, which I believe that it will be, it could really be an awesome story.
This could easily become a popular story, GD related or not.
This sounds like something my parents would read.  I mean that in a good way! Oh no, it's GD-related.
And thanks a lot for your compliments!  |
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018
 | August 13th, 2006 at 02:18pm HavingAGreenDay:A Melancholy Autumn:Sound wicked!
I like the plot. If it's respectfully written, which I believe that it will be, it could really be an awesome story.
This could easily become a popular story, GD related or not.
This sounds like something my parents would read.  I mean that in a good way! Oh no, it's GD-related.
And thanks a lot for your compliments! 
You're welcome.  |
Pickle Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 461
| August 13th, 2006 at 02:55pm It sounds interesting and very intense. Are you going to post it here? |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 13th, 2006 at 03:17pm Pickle:It sounds interesting and very intense. Are you going to post it here? Yes I am.  |
Reality Is Due Post Whore
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 24633
| August 13th, 2006 at 03:19pm
This sounds good,I can't wait to read it! |
Pickle Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 461
| August 13th, 2006 at 04:15pm HavingAGreenDay:Pickle:It sounds interesting and very intense. Are you going to post it here? Yes I am. 
Fun times. Keep us posted! |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 13th, 2006 at 05:22pm |
ThisIsGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 41 Gender: Female Posts: 6877
| August 13th, 2006 at 11:11pm
New story?????!?!?!?!?!?!!!11
*faints* |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 14th, 2006 at 02:44am ThisIsGreenDay:
New story?????!?!?!?!?!?!!!11
*faints* Yes Holly. You'll be okay.
*feeds you*  |
ThisIsGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 41 Gender: Female Posts: 6877
| August 14th, 2006 at 10:48pm HavingAGreenDay:ThisIsGreenDay:
New story?????!?!?!?!?!?!!!11
*faints* Yes Holly. You'll be okay.
*feeds you*  *squee* My favorite icon ever...so far. |
Madeluxx King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2276
| August 14th, 2006 at 11:32pm Wow amazing start to the story! You've got me hooked already  |
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 52 Gender: Female Posts: 4870
 | August 15th, 2006 at 01:34pm really great beginning Rose...
Once again you had a mini movie going in my mind as I read the words...
I will be waiting for more chapters with baited breath  |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 15th, 2006 at 10:40pm sampalletband:really great beginning Rose...
Once again you had a mini movie going in my mind as I read the words...
I will be waiting for more chapters with baited breath  More chapters will be coming as soon as you editors edit like busy little bees. (Meaning my story isn't on the list yet) |
Squishy Cool Idiot
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 614 | August 15th, 2006 at 11:09pm Honestly, I love this story so far =]
At the end, I was like, "WTF? Is someone mugging her right in the middle of the hallway?!" But your summary helps a lot. =p
And ACK, another "fall in love with Tré story"?! =D I LOVE IT!
Gah, I can't wait for the next part!
You're a really good writer!
-_- I hate sounding like a suck-up. |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 16th, 2006 at 01:17pm Squishy Cool:Honestly, I love this story so far =]
At the end, I was like, "WTF? Is someone mugging her right in the middle of the hallway?!" But your summary helps a lot. =p
And ACK, another "fall in love with Tré story"?! =D I LOVE IT!
Gah, I can't wait for the next part!
You're a really good writer!
-_- I hate sounding like a suck-up. I love you.  |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5699
| August 16th, 2006 at 01:18pm |
Squishy Cool Idiot
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 614 | August 16th, 2006 at 01:35pm HavingAGreenDay:Squishy Cool:Honestly, I love this story so far =]
At the end, I was like, "WTF? Is someone mugging her right in the middle of the hallway?!" But your summary helps a lot. =p
And ACK, another "fall in love with Tré story"?! =D I LOVE IT!
Gah, I can't wait for the next part!
You're a really good writer!
-_- I hate sounding like a suck-up. I love you. 
XD
Btw, part 2 was just as good!
Grrr I hate how you get me addicted to your stories =p |
RPattz Board Parasite
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 38824 | August 16th, 2006 at 02:01pm I am already in love with this story, i love all of your other ones too.
You can really vision what is going on in the story in your mind, kinda like a mini movie or whatever!
But I know I am gonna be hooked on this. |