Beverley's Bolero

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HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 01:07pm
Alright, I've been thinking of this plot for a long while and just recently started putting my thoughts into words. I've started writing a new story, entitled Beverley's Bolero.

Here's what I have for a summarization:

Beverley Feldman -nicknamed Bevvy -is a thirty-year-old herbalist doctor from Luverne, Alabama who moves to San Francisco after university and falls in love with a fifty-year-old neurosurgeon named Edward Sampson. When they wed, Beverley becomes eager to have children, but her elder husband hasn't the time to be bothered with such things. She begins to feel discontent with her marriage, and when Edward's work transfers him to Tokyo, she thinks it may be the start of something new for their relationship. She reopens her practice in Japan, developes an illness and endures an operation. On their third wedding anniversary, Edward takes Bevvy out to dinner but slighly ignores her. When they begin to quarrel over the status of their relationship -right in the midst of a Westin Tokyo Hotel restaurant -a catostrophic incident occurs. An earthquake hits Japan and Beverley finds herself lost in the dark of one of the hotel's many hallways.
That's as far as I'll go without giving the whole story away, but I'll assure you there will be lots of romance and tragedy (like you're used to). ~~

Alright, OC introduction.

This is Beverley Sampson (Feldman):

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Played by the lovely Alicia Silverstone. If you're a older crowd, think Aerosmith videos. If you're a younger crowd, think Clueless. And in case you can't tell from the above pictures, her hair is blonde as usual.
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August 13th, 2006 at 02:12pm
Sound wicked! Cool

I like the plot. If it's respectfully written, which I believe that it will be, it could really be an awesome story.

This could easily become a popular story, GD related or not. Up

This sounds like something my parents would read. Think I mean that in a good way!
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 02:17pm
A Melancholy Autumn:
Sound wicked! Cool

I like the plot. If it's respectfully written, which I believe that it will be, it could really be an awesome story.

This could easily become a popular story, GD related or not. Up

This sounds like something my parents would read. Think I mean that in a good way!
Oh no, it's GD-related. Laughing

And thanks a lot for your compliments! Cool
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August 13th, 2006 at 02:18pm
HavingAGreenDay:
A Melancholy Autumn:
Sound wicked! Cool

I like the plot. If it's respectfully written, which I believe that it will be, it could really be an awesome story.

This could easily become a popular story, GD related or not. Up

This sounds like something my parents would read. Think I mean that in a good way!
Oh no, it's GD-related. Laughing

And thanks a lot for your compliments! Cool


You're welcome. Cool
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 02:55pm
It sounds interesting and very intense. Are you going to post it here?
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 03:17pm
Pickle:
It sounds interesting and very intense. Are you going to post it here?
Yes I am. Very Happy
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 03:19pm
Shocked

This sounds good,I can't wait to read it!
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 04:15pm
HavingAGreenDay:
Pickle:
It sounds interesting and very intense. Are you going to post it here?
Yes I am. Very Happy


Fun times. Keep us posted!
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 05:22pm
Alright peeps, here's Beverley's Bolero, part 1
ThisIsGreenDay
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Mibba
August 13th, 2006 at 11:11pm
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New story?????!?!?!?!?!?!!!11

*faints*
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 14th, 2006 at 02:44am
ThisIsGreenDay:
Shocked

New story?????!?!?!?!?!?!!!11

*faints*
Yes Holly. You'll be okay.

*feeds you* Yum
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Mibba
August 14th, 2006 at 10:48pm
HavingAGreenDay:
ThisIsGreenDay:
Shocked

New story?????!?!?!?!?!?!!!11

*faints*
Yes Holly. You'll be okay.

*feeds you* Yum
*squee* My favorite icon ever...so far.
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Mibba
August 14th, 2006 at 11:32pm
Wow amazing start to the story! You've got me hooked already Wink
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August 15th, 2006 at 01:34pm
really great beginning Rose...

Once again you had a mini movie going in my mind as I read the words...


I will be waiting for more chapters with baited breath Wink
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 15th, 2006 at 10:40pm
sampalletband:
really great beginning Rose...

Once again you had a mini movie going in my mind as I read the words...


I will be waiting for more chapters with baited breath Wink
More chapters will be coming as soon as you editors edit like busy little bees. Laughing (Meaning my story isn't on the list yet)
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August 15th, 2006 at 11:09pm
Honestly, I love this story so far =]
At the end, I was like, "WTF? Is someone mugging her right in the middle of the hallway?!" But your summary helps a lot. =p
And ACK, another "fall in love with Tré story"?! =D I LOVE IT!

Gah, I can't wait for the next part!
You're a really good writer!

-_- I hate sounding like a suck-up.
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 16th, 2006 at 01:17pm
Squishy Cool:
Honestly, I love this story so far =]
At the end, I was like, "WTF? Is someone mugging her right in the middle of the hallway?!" But your summary helps a lot. =p
And ACK, another "fall in love with Tré story"?! =D I LOVE IT!

Gah, I can't wait for the next part!
You're a really good writer!

-_- I hate sounding like a suck-up.
I love you. Shocked
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
August 16th, 2006 at 01:18pm
Alright, here's Part 2.
Squishy Cool
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August 16th, 2006 at 01:35pm
HavingAGreenDay:
Squishy Cool:
Honestly, I love this story so far =]
At the end, I was like, "WTF? Is someone mugging her right in the middle of the hallway?!" But your summary helps a lot. =p
And ACK, another "fall in love with Tré story"?! =D I LOVE IT!

Gah, I can't wait for the next part!
You're a really good writer!

-_- I hate sounding like a suck-up.
I love you. Shocked


XD
Btw, part 2 was just as good!
Grrr I hate how you get me addicted to your stories =p
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August 16th, 2006 at 02:01pm
I am already in love with this story, i love all of your other ones too.
You can really vision what is going on in the story in your mind, kinda like a mini movie or whatever!
But I know I am gonna be hooked on this.
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