Titanic
So i'm doing a Speech on Titanic in my speech class. Yea its pretty cool. Very emotional looking at this stuff and all that. I got bored one day in 4th hour Geomatry and i wrote this poem about Titanic. Well i hope you like it.
Titanic
The great ship of the sea
Her majestic look was even more great
As she rested, everyone was in awe
Was even more futuristic of the era
When she set sail
The wind blew around her was calm
The sun light reflected off her colors
As everyone knew, nothing was wrong
Then...the cold of night took her
Swept her to a dark figure
Tried to avoid the great figure
Sadly it cut her open and she bled in water
She tried to stay afloat
As her passengers going for the lifeboats
While others screamed and dived to their deaths
As the ocean was too great...
She broke apart in shame
Bringing with her the frozen corpses
As her stern bobbed with bittersweet pride
After that moment...
She was gone
Laying in the Abyess
Where she will stay forever
The so called "unsinkable" ship...
Yea i dont know if you guys care much anymore about the Titanic, but spending time researching her. She has a hold of me and i became more appericative of her and her sinking. This poem means a lot to me I hope you can say the same. To me the poem isnt the only Art in this blog. It is the ship also that is the Art.
Thanks for reading and commenting i do appericate it.
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wow great poem :D <3
ive been inlove with her my whole life
she makes me emotional
Family that skatterd that day... lovers.. everyone.
Its great to see people caring and is researching about her to this day
Titanic still fascinates us! <3
And the movie is great too x)
Plunkie., November 30th, 2008 at 02:22:31pm
'the titanic' is such a terrible tragedy. I cannot imagine it ever happening to me...
the movie was amazing though.
good blog < 3
Bubble Wrap., November 28th, 2008 at 07:54:07pm
I've always loved the mystery about Titanic. The movie is good and I wish I could've been around to see te real ship.
ROSLYNN, November 27th, 2008 at 10:40:03pm
Brillaintly written. Really emotionally intact and vivid. You have justified how the Titanic was a monumentel landmark. Really impressed Paige, you have a talent for poetry. :D
Let's Live A Dream, November 27th, 2008 at 06:13:08pm
nice poem.
though it kinda creeps me how you call it "her"
Miss Neurotic, November 27th, 2008 at 12:56:50pm
garrett nickelsen., November 27th, 2008 at 03:54:14pm
nice poem.
though it kinda creeps me how you call it "her"
princess consuela, November 27th, 2008 at 12:56:50pm
I used to be able to name every important event about the Titanic xD
Mareh, November 27th, 2008 at 02:11:59am
Wow, that was awesome. :)
I really liked it ^^
I love the story of the Titanic. It's sad, but it's really cool too.
In a...not...morbid way. :D
I love the poem. ^^
Tyler Durden, November 26th, 2008 at 02:14:43pm
this iz 1 of the koolest poemz i ever read
nice job n i think ull do good n class w/ this
gaming4pizza, November 26th, 2008 at 02:14:01pm
Heey, i did have time to read it today :) i got too bored studying, so i quit :D. Great blog. awesome poem. <3
GREENDAYxMCR, November 26th, 2008 at 02:13:07pm
My father always read me Titanic historical books when I was a kid, so I guess his, well you can call it "obsession" has passed on to me. I think it's an extremely capitvating, mysterious, and beautiful story.
Mr. Teatime, November 26th, 2008 at 02:12:45pm
Wow O.o
I love her to.. And I really enjoy your poem^^<3
Fix, November 26th, 2008 at 02:11:41pm