Rain Poem (by Me)
I see your voice
And I hear your pain
I feel myour sadness
All in the rain
The rain is your crutch
'Cause I cant see you cry
But I know it's there
Looming inside
I can tell you arent happy
From the cuts on your arms
I know you did it:
All this self-inflicted harm
Your mind is a frenzy
It drives you insane
But we know it wont matter
When we dance in the rain
And I hear your pain
I feel myour sadness
All in the rain
The rain is your crutch
'Cause I cant see you cry
But I know it's there
Looming inside
I can tell you arent happy
From the cuts on your arms
I know you did it:
All this self-inflicted harm
Your mind is a frenzy
It drives you insane
But we know it wont matter
When we dance in the rain
AWesome!!! you should turn in into a song
GreenDayMnority, September 17th, 2010 at 11:53:08am
I think that's good, a lot of feeling put into it. Keep writing, you can do a lot :)
Ensiferum, September 14th, 2010 at 10:58:01am
wow. I like that poem! It's cool! Keep writing!
She Haunts Me, September 13th, 2010 at 02:14:56pm
this is really good I like it alot.
Shoelace-Necktie, September 12th, 2010 at 07:41:18am
Nawh. I like this. A LOT.
Vegemite, September 12th, 2010 at 05:44:45am
This is good :)
Lucky 13, September 11th, 2010 at 06:15:44pm