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Br@+ King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 2033
 | July 22nd, 2006 at 07:57am Im stuck for chapter 10 in my story Let me kiss you one more time. I mean i have some idea's [but i don't wanna give it away] but i dunno if they'll fit in the story. So uh....could anyone help? Thanks  |
Banach95 Moderator
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4821
 | July 22nd, 2006 at 07:59am I'll help Brat  PM me  |
Rock_Ur_Self Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 54
| July 25th, 2006 at 06:30pm I was wondering if someone could help me with my story 'Disturbing the Peace'..I have the plot pretty much planned out.
I was just wondering if someone could give me some tips or something to help make my writing a bit better.
Here's the link to my story:
http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/7275/0/ |
Pickle Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 461
| July 25th, 2006 at 08:33pm I'll help ya out Rock_Ur_Self. I'll be sending you a PM in a bit. |
ThisIsGreenDay King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 25 Gender: Female Posts: 4684
| July 26th, 2006 at 06:43am Here's a helpful hint to everyone in regard to writing a story:
DO NOT WRITE ABOUT INCEST.
It's disgusting, wrong in so many ways.
*shudders* |
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 7016
 | July 26th, 2006 at 07:02am ThisIsGreenDay:Here's a helpful hint to everyone in regard to writing a story:
DO NOT WRITE ABOUT INCEST.
It's disgusting, wrong in so many ways.
*shudders* I concur! Quite a disturbing subject, really. So kiddies, no writing about people getting intimate with their cousins, aunts, uncles, siblings...you get the point.  |
Banach95 Moderator
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4821
 | July 26th, 2006 at 11:47am okay folks... move alone... nothing to see here... |
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 7016
 | July 27th, 2006 at 07:32pm This things been dead for a bit...no new ideas, apparently...  |
steady riot. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 2907 | July 27th, 2006 at 09:09pm in_paradise_with_st_jimmy:This things been dead for a bit...no new ideas, apparently... 
...Or maybe everyone is scared to ask for help  |
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 7016
 | July 27th, 2006 at 09:10pm Power to the Peaceful:in_paradise_with_st_jimmy:This things been dead for a bit...no new ideas, apparently... 
...Or maybe everyone is scared to ask for help  Maybe... |
paperwings. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 6924
 | July 28th, 2006 at 09:45am Don't you think we would all be more helpful if we were all standing in our front yard, staring directly into the sun?!
I'm not up to giving advice or taking any at the moment.
Yep. This was an idiot's post. -_- |
paperwings. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 6924
 | July 29th, 2006 at 06:00am Who edited my post? I didn't write some of that. o_o |
Banach95 Moderator
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4821
 | July 29th, 2006 at 06:05am Handguns For Hearts:Who edited my post? I didn't write some of that. o_o
DAMMIT that was me... I meant to hit quote and I hit edit instead...
Sorry
no it wasn't....
I get PMs from writers sometimes and I direct them here
That's how we got our first customer  |
paperwings. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 6924
 | July 29th, 2006 at 06:37am This forum is beginning to feel like home. I'm a homebody...
I feel completely dry and uninspired.
I haven't had the slightest spark of inspiration in the last few days and it feels somewhat empty. I have sunk to an all-time low and begun to wallow in self pity...how stupid is that...
So...I've been insanely, restlessly, madly studying everyone elses way of writing. I read books sometimes to figure out the authors way I writing...I compare them all too often... |
Xx.Frayed_Mohawk.xX Geek
 Age: 15 Gender: Female Posts: 254 | July 29th, 2006 at 10:39am i still need help with captivated |
steady riot. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 2907 | July 29th, 2006 at 06:59pm the_tension:i still need help with captivated
What exactly do you need help with? A read-over? |
CristhyneS Jackass
 Age: 18 Gender: Female Posts: 1400
| July 30th, 2006 at 12:40am Handguns For Hearts:This forum is beginning to feel like home. I'm a homebody...
I feel completely dry and uninspired.
I haven't had the slightest spark of inspiration in the last few days and it feels somewhat empty. I have sunk to an all-time low and begun to wallow in self pity...how stupid is that...
So...I've been insanely, restlessly, madly studying everyone elses way of writing. I read books sometimes to figure out the authors way I writing...I compare them all too often...
Join the club.  |
HavingAGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 19 Gender: Female Posts: 5471
| July 30th, 2006 at 12:57am CristhyneS:Handguns For Hearts:This forum is beginning to feel like home. I'm a homebody...
I feel completely dry and uninspired.
I haven't had the slightest spark of inspiration in the last few days and it feels somewhat empty. I have sunk to an all-time low and begun to wallow in self pity...how stupid is that...
So...I've been insanely, restlessly, madly studying everyone elses way of writing. I read books sometimes to figure out the authors way I writing...I compare them all too often...
Join the club.  Can I join the club too?  |
CristhyneS Jackass
 Age: 18 Gender: Female Posts: 1400
| July 30th, 2006 at 01:02am Sure. You're more than welcome. |
Xx.Frayed_Mohawk.xX Geek
 Age: 15 Gender: Female Posts: 254 | July 30th, 2006 at 02:47am Power to the Peaceful:the_tension:i still need help with captivated
What exactly do you need help with? A read-over?
yeah
and ideas |