Story Board Brainstorming & 'Mentor' Thread

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Br@+
King For A Couple Of Days
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July 22nd, 2006 at 01:57am
Im stuck for chapter 10 in my story Let me kiss you one more time. I mean i have some idea's [but i don't wanna give it away] but i dunno if they'll fit in the story. So uh....could anyone help? Thanks Hug
Banach95
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Mibba Blog
July 22nd, 2006 at 01:59am
I'll help Brat Smile PM me Very Happy
Rock_Ur_Self
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Mibba
July 25th, 2006 at 12:30pm
I was wondering if someone could help me with my story 'Disturbing the Peace'..I have the plot pretty much planned out.

I was just wondering if someone could give me some tips or something to help make my writing a bit better. Smile

Here's the link to my story:
http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/7275/0/
Pickle
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Mibba
July 25th, 2006 at 02:33pm
I'll help ya out Rock_Ur_Self. I'll be sending you a PM in a bit.
ThisIsGreenDay
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Mibba
July 26th, 2006 at 12:43am
Here's a helpful hint to everyone in regard to writing a story:

DO NOT WRITE ABOUT INCEST.

Rolling Eyes

It's disgusting, wrong in so many ways.

*shudders*
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy
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Mibba Blog
July 26th, 2006 at 01:02am
ThisIsGreenDay:
Here's a helpful hint to everyone in regard to writing a story:

DO NOT WRITE ABOUT INCEST.

Rolling Eyes

It's disgusting, wrong in so many ways.

*shudders*
I concur! Quite a disturbing subject, really. So kiddies, no writing about people getting intimate with their cousins, aunts, uncles, siblings...you get the point. Rolling Eyes
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba Blog
July 26th, 2006 at 05:47am
okay folks... move alone... nothing to see here...
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy
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Mibba Blog
July 27th, 2006 at 01:32pm
This things been dead for a bit...no new ideas, apparently...Think
steady riot.
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July 27th, 2006 at 03:09pm
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy:
This things been dead for a bit...no new ideas, apparently...Think



...Or maybe everyone is scared to ask for help Confused
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy
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Mibba Blog
July 27th, 2006 at 03:10pm
Power to the Peaceful:
in_paradise_with_st_jimmy:
This things been dead for a bit...no new ideas, apparently...Think



...Or maybe everyone is scared to ask for help Confused
Maybe...
davey jones.
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Mibba Blog
July 28th, 2006 at 03:45am
Don't you think we would all be more helpful if we were all standing in our front yard, staring directly into the sun?! Surprised Rolling Eyes

I'm not up to giving advice or taking any at the moment.

Yep. This was an idiot's post. -_-
davey jones.
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Mibba Blog
July 29th, 2006 at 12:00am
Who edited my post? I didn't write some of that. o_o
Banach95
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Mibba Blog
July 29th, 2006 at 12:05am
Handguns For Hearts:
Who edited my post? I didn't write some of that. o_o



DAMMIT that was me... I meant to hit quote and I hit edit instead...


Sorry Embarassed


no it wasn't....


I get PMs from writers sometimes and I direct them here Smile

That's how we got our first customer Wink
davey jones.
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Mibba Blog
July 29th, 2006 at 12:37am
This forum is beginning to feel like home. I'm a homebody...

I feel completely dry and uninspired.

I haven't had the slightest spark of inspiration in the last few days and it feels somewhat empty. I have sunk to an all-time low and begun to wallow in self pity...how stupid is that...Very Happy

So...I've been insanely, restlessly, madly studying everyone elses way of writing. I read books sometimes to figure out the authors way I writing...I compare them all too often...
Xx.Frayed_Mohawk.xX
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July 29th, 2006 at 04:39am
i still need help with captivated
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
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July 29th, 2006 at 12:59pm
the_tension:
i still need help with captivated



What exactly do you need help with? A read-over?
CristhyneS
Jackass
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Mibba
July 29th, 2006 at 06:40pm
Handguns For Hearts:
This forum is beginning to feel like home. I'm a homebody...

I feel completely dry and uninspired.

I haven't had the slightest spark of inspiration in the last few days and it feels somewhat empty. I have sunk to an all-time low and begun to wallow in self pity...how stupid is that...Very Happy

So...I've been insanely, restlessly, madly studying everyone elses way of writing. I read books sometimes to figure out the authors way I writing...I compare them all too often...


Join the club. Rolling Eyes
HavingAGreenDay
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Mibba
July 29th, 2006 at 06:57pm
CristhyneS:
Handguns For Hearts:
This forum is beginning to feel like home. I'm a homebody...

I feel completely dry and uninspired.

I haven't had the slightest spark of inspiration in the last few days and it feels somewhat empty. I have sunk to an all-time low and begun to wallow in self pity...how stupid is that...Very Happy

So...I've been insanely, restlessly, madly studying everyone elses way of writing. I read books sometimes to figure out the authors way I writing...I compare them all too often...


Join the club. Rolling Eyes
Can I join the club too? Laughing
CristhyneS
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Mibba
July 29th, 2006 at 07:02pm
Sure. You're more than welcome.
Xx.Frayed_Mohawk.xX
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Xx.Frayed_Mohawk.xX
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July 29th, 2006 at 08:47pm
Power to the Peaceful:
the_tension:
i still need help with captivated



What exactly do you need help with? A read-over?


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